This blog is a reflection on my midterm conference.
Some questions we explored during the conference was do I think my hiraeth is a narrative. I answered yes because it's about a true story that happened to me in my life. Also something that was asked is do I think my Slumdog Millionaire argument essay was more of an argument or a summary. I said it was more of a summery because it was more telling what happened in the movie rather that answering the question “was it Salim's choices or society who made him who he was as an adult.” Some main takeaways from our discussion was how to make my hiraeth better and how I could expand it to get to the 1500 words. Also how I could improve my argumentative essay. Some plans for revision is for my hiraeth i'm going to add some more dialogue of my grandmother and maybe go to the house now after selling it and see how it's different. Also we just had another thursday night dinner at my cousins last week without her there but we were eating on her dining room table. Maybe i'll compare what is different now. Also for my Slumdog Millionaire essay I’m going to get rid of the word “would”.
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